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Time alone love woe by ~mourningreign:iconmourningreign:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


So touched by love whilst in your touch
But to touch without feeling isn’t enough
Time is fading this disease is too much
To be forsaken by the ones we love

To see is too feel, wonderful and real
Before first touch, your eyes will reveal
To hold is to know, life moves so slow
It is as such, never worth the woe

My body floats covered in darkness
Timeless descent I’ll forever atone
And while I repent ill ponder in unrest
What is life worth if it is spent alone?

To see is too feel, wonderful and real
Before first touch, your eyes will reveal
To hold is to know, life moves so slow
It is as such, never worth the woe

Will you spend a lifetime in the cold?
All day committing sins new and old
For life this sweet misery to be
Will be that much easier spent with me

To see is too feel, wonderful and real
Before first touch, your eyes will reveal
To hold is to know, life moves so slow
It is as such, never worth the woe
©2007-2009 ~mourningreign
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Inspired by Queen Of The Damned

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~VampireVengeance Jan 27, 2007, 11:18:23 AM
This is really good! It kind of reminds me of romeo and juliet though..alittle :)

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Light up your face with gladness
Hide every trace of sadness
Although a tear maybe ever so near
That's the time you must keep on trying
Smile, what's the use of crying
You'll find that life is stillworth while
If you'll just smile.
-Charlie Chaplin
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~lolaferocious Jan 28, 2007, 12:24:55 AM
i'd like to hear the song that goes with that.. do your lyrics all have music that goes with them? you write lots of stuff really quickly..
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~lolaferocious Jan 28, 2007, 12:25:20 AM
oh is that even a song? lol
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~mourningreign Jan 28, 2007, 5:03:58 AM
It is a song I guess, I didnt create music for it though, I just wrote down my thoughts basically and turned they to song. The lyrics I write for the band are more doom and gloom, I might put a song up that i wrote maybe with music but the one i have in mind isnt very poetic, and there is no real great meanings or anything behind the words.

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Go Jark! I choose you! :pokejark:

I am Grork. GRORK SMASH! :strong:
Grork smash your head off! Then Grork eat your faeces! GRORK MAIM!
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~mourningreign Jan 28, 2007, 5:05:24 AM
Romeo and Juliet? Awesome! It actually made me think of Romeo and Juliet a little too believe it or not!

--
Go Jark! I choose you! :pokejark:

I am Grork. GRORK SMASH! :strong:
Grork smash your head off! Then Grork eat your faeces! GRORK MAIM!
:iconvampirevengeance:
~VampireVengeance Jan 28, 2007, 1:06:54 PM
cool! :)

--
Light up your face with gladness
Hide every trace of sadness
Although a tear maybe ever so near
That's the time you must keep on trying
Smile, what's the use of crying
You'll find that life is stillworth while
If you'll just smile.
-Charlie Chaplin
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~ambientsalamander Feb 14, 2007, 6:54:12 AM
To hold is to know, life moves so slow. I know that feeling!
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~deathbyacid Mar 3, 2007, 5:54:18 PM
well i think it be a good ballad...

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"No man shall take the fear from himself, for he is fear himself."
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~mourningreign Mar 4, 2007, 2:36:45 AM
What a wonderful feeling indeed!

--
Go Jark! I choose you! :pokejark:

I am Grork. GRORK SMASH! :strong:
Grork smash your head off! Then Grork eat your faeces! GRORK MAIM!
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