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A girl who stops the seasons
Gives me so many reasons
For these feelings
To never go away

My wounds seem to heal
These dreams are so real
I can’t conceal
Can’t make them stay

Love hurts us all
But it hurts me the most
For I am me
I can’t feel your pain

Its all so true
So much pain over you
Can’t you see?
Its all just the same

Like a filly or a mare
So young and so fair
Strength in you I see
As well as weakness through me

Why is it this way?
Suffering all day
Head in hands it wasn’t planned
And now I have to pay

Why am I so pathetic?
Why can’t I just stop?
Save myself the humiliation
Admit that love its not
©2007-2009 ~mourningreign
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Author's Comments

Yet another deviation, I am apparently swamped with inspiration at the moment. I actually really like this song. It was inspired by one of my deviant friend's signatures, which said "a kiss to stop the seasons", and i thought wow thats a powerful line to start a song/poem, and in the spirit of all great artistes i stole it! then changed it and claimed it as my own! haha, but yeah I hope you like this one.
It explores my most prominent feelings at the current moment. I answered a deviants question on what one of my songs was about today, and when i answered i thought well this song doesnt really portray that at all, at least not very clearly, so this one is a little more blatant. Its about possible pseudo love, at least i think it is, I don't fully understand these feelings myself, and I just believe that the idea of anything close to love in my current situation is nothing short of ridiculous.... ok i will stop blabbering now!

wow ok, i know i said i would stop writing in here, this is the last bit i swear! I just re-read the piece, and its actually really sad, and quite terrible, I thought it was really happy at first and about love you know, but its actually really depressing and almost emo, dun dun duh! sorry about that people! I still like it though I think it flows kind of well, and yeah anyway this is the end. bloody read only mode DA, this is why this comments thing is really huge, if i leave these screens on over night someone will come and exit them i'm sure. oh too much drama and i'm too tired to think.

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:iconhenako:
Wow..I really like it. Great job!

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:iconmourningreign:
Cool, thanks very much for your feedback!

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:iconnarumocha:
You did a great job on this! :D

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:iconnarumocha:
You did a great job on this! :D

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In order to show our youth, we shall brush our teeth five times a day, cut our hair into bowlcuts, grow our eyebrows out, and wear green spandex! WHO'S WITH MEH?!

Best. Website. Ever.: [link]
:icondeathbyacid:
yer singing this was fun, thanks dude

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:iconmourningreign:
Thank you! glad you like it :D

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Go Jark! I choose you! :pokejark:

I am Grork. GRORK SMASH! :strong:
Grork smash your head off! Then Grork eat your faeces! GRORK MAIM!
:iconmourningreign:
I'm glad you enjoyed yourself!

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Go Jark! I choose you! :pokejark:

I am Grork. GRORK SMASH! :strong:
Grork smash your head off! Then Grork eat your faeces! GRORK MAIM!
:iconlolaferocious:
i like it but it's sad.
:icontharian:
Content's not that bad but the rhythm of the third lines is... strange, you could easily outline it all to one rhythm by changing a couple of words, yet you didn't oO

I'm used to better stuff coming from you :p

Anyways, still not bad ;)

P.S. I'm back :)

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