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Dark Eden

Lost in dormant dreams so unattainable
A place where solace is found, eternally
And upon finding them so intangible
I settle in this place oh so readily

And through troubled waters I cross
Upon this Eden I gain just a glimpse
And to know then that I am lost
This construct of heaven in constant eclipse

Majestic playground of sick fantasies
Hallucinations that have come undone
Mix so easily with the tragedies
My mind a novel, this dark eden

Left to wonder in timelessness
Re-use of words brings me to pause
And as I’m laid down to rest
I leave my mind this world of flaws
©2007-2009 ~mourningreign
:iconmourningreign:

Author's Comments

This started off as one thing, and ended up as me relating my mind and my inability to write well constructed and original pieces, to some sort of dark, decrepid, and overgrown garden of heaven. Enlightening, no?

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:iconkashmir-gr:
its beautifully written...

i especially like the last strenza.

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Art, like morality, consists in drawing the line somewhere...

avatar made by the one and only~gespi
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16November 2009
:iconmourningreign:
Thank you very much

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~99% of teens worship me as their new god, if you are one of the 1% that doesn't, then why the f*ck not?

Like a flower needs water, you need me.
:icondarkmoon69:
tis quite lovely indeed
I like the last two stanzas alot
nice work :D

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From the madness of the governments to the vengeance of the sea
Everything is eclipsed by the shape of destiny
:iconaeuphoriceden:
I love this! I like how it's you against the world and how you describe the escapism!
Very cool!
:heart:
xxxx
:iconmourningreign:
Thank you. Yes escape is often a necessity when all seems to be against you and often the mind is the only hospitable place to seek refuge within.

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~99% of teens worship me as their new god, if you are one of the 1% that doesn't, then why the f*ck not?

Like a flower needs water, you need me.
:iconmourningreign:
Thank you very much!

--
~99% of teens worship me as their new god, if you are one of the 1% that doesn't, then why the f*ck not?

Like a flower needs water, you need me.
:icondarkmoon69:
yir so very welcome

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From the madness of the governments to the vengeance of the sea
Everything is eclipsed by the shape of destiny
:iconlolaferocious:
you haven't written anything for awhile.
i like this.
i miss you, how have you been?
:iconmourningreign:
Thank you, yeah I know, I have been busy in the real world, leaving no time for my amazing cyber life! I am worried though because I have suddenly gained the ability to touch type! No idea how, but I am doing it. Weird huh? I have been ok, my friends are all shitting me though. I am going out on a date with this girl who works in a shop across from mine, and I am really scared! How are you?

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~99% of teens worship me as their new god, if you are one of the 1% that doesn't, then why the f*ck not?

Like a flower needs water, you need me.

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